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Unread postPosted: 07 Aug 2006, 08:17 
Mikah's Muse
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hi well heres my fan fiction

She opened her eyes and smiled. The white sheets were wrapped around them keeping them both warm. His arms entwined around her body as she slept, but her own hands rested on her tummy, that was growing bigger by the day. She felt sick, but she was used to waking up feeling like that now. No one had told her that the bit before giving birth was so painful. Feeling sick all the time, back pains, going to the loo so often she knew exactly how many tiles there were on the bathroom ceiling. But she didn’t care; after all,
in a few days she was going to be a mother. Every thing was perfect. She was in bed with the person she wanted to be with for the rest of her life. Harry. Harry and Ellen. Even their names went together.

Suddenly Daisy sprung into the room and jumped on their bed, awaking Harry.

“Hello darling” he smiled at his daughter.

Daisy snuggled under the cover in-between Harry and Ellen. Kizzy came rushing in dressed in her nighty.

“What’s all the noise for?” she asked

“Oh, sorry Kizzy, we didn’t mean to wake you up” Ellen apologized.

“Never mind, I’m up now,” Kizzy said as she climbed into the bed and cuddled up to her dad.

“All my favorite girls” Harry said, making Ellen, Kizzy and Daisy chuckle. Harry got out of bed. His bare body ran across the room to his dressing gown.

“I saw Daddies bum!” Daisy laughed.

“Oi don’t be cheeky” Harry joked.

“I bet Ellen liked looking at his bum!” Kizzy laughed.

“Oi, now its you being cheeky, but yes, your dad had a very nice bottom!” Ellen answered, sending Kizzy and Daisy into fits of giggles.

Harry pulled on his dressing gown and strolled downstairs. Daisy snuggled up to Ellen, and put her small hands onto her bulging tummy.

“When’s the baby coming out?” Daisy asked Ellen.

“Well it should now, but you can’t say exactly when it’s going to pop out” Ellen answers.

“I can’t wait to have another brother or sister” Kizzy tells Ellen, “ I miss Tali so much” she sighed

Harry walked back into the room with a tray in his hand. Freshly squeezed orange juice, toast and best of all, chocolate!

“Yum!” Ellen said rubbing her tummy.

“Sorry, the toast is a bit burnt” apologized Harry.

“That’s how I like it.” Ellen said smiling warmly at Harry

That’s what Harry loved about Ellen. She made him feel good all the time, and she was absolutely beautiful. He loved her so much. He placed the tray on the bed and climbed back in. He put his arm around Ellen. She rested her head on his chest and could feel his steady heart beat.
Ellen reached for a bit of toast, but noticed a wet patch on the bed. She hadn’t noticed the orange juice spill. She got out of bed confused.

“What’s up Ellen?” Harry questioned Ellen, seeing her puzzles face.

“I’m not sure, but there’s water on the bed and I don’t know where it came from.”

“Ellen” Harry said.


“Look at your pajama bottoms.”

“Oh my god!” Ellen shouted.

“Your waters broken” Kizzy figured out.

“What does that mean?” asked Daisy

“Ellen’s going to have the baby!” Kizzy replied excitedly.

“Come on, we need to get you to the hospital!” Harry told Ellen as he rushed around the room gathering all the things that she might need.

“Kizzy, stay here and look after everyone. I’ll come back and get you later.” Harry told her.

Ellen was in shock, but she let Harry lead her to the car.

“Owwwww” Ellen screamed.

This was it; she was going to have her baby!
Ellens eyes focused on the room and people around her. Everything was so white and clean.She heard piercing cries of a baby. Her baby. Lucy, Ellens midwife, handed the bundle into her arms

“Here’s your baby girl” Lucy told Ellen.

Ellen held the new born baby in her arms. Ellens eyes welled up and she started to cry. She was so happy, she was a mum. Nina and Harry were standing either side of her. She handed the baby to Harry. Although he didn’t want to show it , Ellen could see the tears in his eyes.
Nina leant over to Ellen and hugged her.

“Thanks for being here for me Nina” Ellen whispered in her ear.

“That’s what family is for”

“Harry, can Nina have a hold?”

“Ye of corse” Harry replied, handing his beautiful daughter over to Nina

“Wow, Ellen…she’s beautiful!”

“Ye, she’s absolutely beautiful” Ellen said still watery eyed.

“I’m an aunty!” Nina said excitedly “ Aunty Nina – I like the sound of that!” she said pleased.

Harry kissed Ellen on the head.

“Go and phone the kids, they should see their sister.” Ellen told Harry.

“Ye you’re right”

He picked up the phone and dialed his home number.

“Hi Kizzy”

“Is Ellen OK Dad?” Kizzy asked.

“Yes, she’s fine. Do you want to come and see your baby sister?” Harry asked, even though he knew what the answer would be.

“What kind of question is that? Of course we do!”

“OK do you want me to come and pick you up?” Harry offered

“No, you stay with Ellen, we will get a taxi.”

“OK, see you later honey” Harry said and put the phone down.

Wow, Kizzy thought to herself. Another sister. If only Tali were here to see it.

“Oi” she screamed up the stairs, “Ellen’s had the baby.

One by one they piled into the taxi.

“Where to?” the taxi driver asked.

“The hospital please”

Kizzy loved acting grown up. She loved looking after her brothers and sisters. She would never let anyone hurt them.
She was so wound up in her thoughts that she didn’t notice the taxi driver speed up. She looked over his shoulder and was shocked to see the speed he was traveling.

“Isn’t that above the speed limit?” she asked nervously.

“Shut up you little bitch!”

Kizzy got scared. What was he going to do to them?
The car swerved a corner and smashed into a parked lorry.

Kizzys world went black.
Harry wondered down the Holby City corridors, towards the drink machine.

“Hi Harry” Selena said walking up to him.

“Ellen’s had the baby!” He couldn’t keep it in, he was to excited.

“Wow…I mean that’s great!, Boy or Girl?”

“A beautiful girl, looks just like Ellen.”

Selena couldn’t help but feel jealous. She remembered a time, long ago when she wanted Harry to be the father of her children. But that blonde tart always gets what she wants with men.



“Are you and Ellen…you know…together?”

“Well I love her and she is the mother to my daughter.”

“Oh” Selena said sounding disappointed

“Why” Harry asked.

“Are you sure she’s what you want?”

“Selena, what are you trying to tell me?”

It had been to long, she couldn’t hold back any longer.

“Harry, she’s not right for you, break up with her” Selena said in a hurry.

Harry took a step back, shocked at what she had said.

“Harry please, just listen.

Harry walked away. Selena ran after him.

“Harry, I still love you.”

Harry didn’t have time to answer. She kissed him on the lips, but that wasn’t enough for Selena. She held him tight, up against her. Harry didn’t pull back and the stayed locked in a romantic, passionate embrace.
Nina walked around the corner and stood still with shock.
But before any of them could do anything, Josh burst through the doors.

“ Selena, over here now!” Josh told her. “This girl has been in a car accident, we need to get her to recuss immediately”

Harry didn’t pay much attention to the young girl lying unconscious across the trolly. Her black hair was pushed back behind her sweating head. She looked pale. Deadly pale.

The kids should be here by now, Harry thought to himself.
He followed Selena to recuss. What was he going to do? She had just told him that she still loves him. But she had her chance. He was with Ellen now. He was happy. But was he? Like Selena had said, are you sure shes what you want? He didn’t know anymore. Having another kid was great, but should he stay with Ellen just because of the baby?
There were to many questions.
Who did he want in his heart?
Ellen or Selena?

From Holly


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 Post subject: Re: Fan Fiction
Unread postPosted: 13 Aug 2007, 17:36 
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Until now I did not read this story. It is great! What a fantasy and what a good writer.
Yep, I loved it for sure.

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